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Unfortunately, America was too afraid to see what would happen if justice was served. How would America react if a white man unlawfully murdered a black teen and then left his body eight miles down the Tallahatchie River? America would react by ruling the white man not guilty nor punishing him for his actions.
While the American justice system has evolved since then, some things still haven't changed. We are still hearing cases of blacks being murdered by whites, whites pleading not-guilty, and not serving jail time for criminal activity. The American justice system is a loaded dice; consistently rolling a one in favor of only one race in our society.
All in all, America needs to reduce criminal activity. America also needs to appropriately deal with criminal activity. When police forces are shooting at black teens this creates unstable trust between the authority and the community. Police are there to keep us and our communities safe, yet who feels safe when you are not sure what "type" of cop you might encounter.
Our society is immoral. Our society is injustice. Our society is evolution and plat-owed. Our society needs to make a change and role a six or a five rather than rolling a one every time an innocent minority is killed.
I thought you did a great job creating a metaphor that connected very well to the meaning of your analysis. I liked how you used strong language, which made your argument more convincing and powerful.
ReplyDeleteYou demonstrated your point well by drawing parallels between the recent cases of the American justice system back to 1955 where the system was essentially the same. Your entire piece was persuading and effective.
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ReplyDeleteI like how you tied the recent and old incidents together. You showed how they all tie together. Your argument is strong and solid. Great job!
ReplyDeleteI really like how you connected past events to more recent ones-- it really strengthens your argument and shows how this problem is one that has been present throughout American history and is not something that will easily go away.
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